(5) 重新改写
重新改写法是指根据译作需要，对原作重新进行加工，代之以适合译语读者所喜闻乐见的内容，迎合他们的口味，以达到广告宣传的目的。例如下面的这则广告原文就与其“译文”迥异：
原文：
What's in a name?
It sounds ordinary on paper. A white shirt with a blue check. In fact, if you asked most men if they had a white shirt with a blue check，they'd say yes.
But the shirt illustrated on the opposite page is an adventurous white and blue shirt. Yet it would fit beautifully into your wardrobe. And no one would accuse you of looking less than a gentleman. Predictably , the different white and blue check shirt has a different name. Viyela House. It's tailored in crisp cool cotton and perfectly cut out for city life. Remember our name next time you are hunting for a shirt to give you more than just a background for your tie.
On women and children's wear as well as on men's shirts，our label says—quietly but persuasively—all there is to say about our good quality and your good taste.
Our label is our promise.
译文：
名牌推荐
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另外，因宣传载体改变而对广告进行重新改写也很常见。比如，原文是印刷广告，译文的对象却是电台听众，这时译者可以根据译文广告载体的形式对原广告重新进行改写，以适合新的媒体形式和读者选观众对象。
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