I saw a flaming doorway in front,put the bundle over my face and ran. My feet burned me terribly,but I got through. As I reached the cold air outside, my bundle of clothes gave a thin cry. I nearly dropped it in my surprise. Then I saw a crowd gathered in the street. A woman in a night-dress and a borrowed man's coat screamed as she saw me and came running madly.

“My baby! My baby!"she cried.The crowd cheered wildly as she took the smoke-blackened bundle out of my arms. I had some difficulty in recognizing her. She was the Moyor's wife and I have saved her baby,I was a hero!

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关键词语：

in the middle of the night, on the top floor of an old wooden house,waked up by fire and smoke, ran away from the stairs, ran into a room, fell over something soft, picked up a bundle, crashed to the floor below, ran through a flaming doorway, the bundle gave a cry, a woman screamed and ran towards the author, she was the Mayor's wife, the author became a hero

提纲：

时间：in the middle of the night

地点：on the top floor of an old wooden house

人物：the author

事件：the author,waked up by fire,rushed away from the stairs, picked up the bundle of clothes, protected himself, ran through a flamimg doorway, the bundle gave a cry,a baby

结果：the author became a hero

范文：

One night the author stayed on the top floor of an old strange wooden house and was waked up by fire and smoke and screams. In a hurry he rushed away from the stairs, got into a room and fell over something soft. He picked up the bundle of clothes to protect himself and crashed to the floor below. When he ran through a flaming doorway the bundle gave a faint cry. A woman screamed and ran to get the bundle which turned out to be her baby. The woman was the Mayor's wife and the author became a hero at once.

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