例2.

加强西部地区商品和要素市场的培育和建设。

A. Efforts will be made to develop markets of consumer goods and factors of production in the western region.

B. We will develop markets of consumer goods and factors of production in the western region.

上例中，efforts will be made to不起任何实质作用，惟一的作用就是为了把短语变为句子，这不符合简洁的原则。所以，主动句更好一些。

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