译文2 :
Treatment may be sought outside the detention center on bail if an individual demonstmtes clinical symptoms and is confirmed to have AIDS by medical experts designated by local health administrative departments, and if no treatment in quarantine can be provided within the place of detention. (避免了 he or she)
译文3:
If an individual demonstrates clinical symptoms and is confirmed to have AIDS by medical experts designated by local health administrative departments, he or she may seek treatment outside the detention center on bail if no treatment in quarantine can be provided within the place of detention.
而不用翻译为：
For an infected individual that demonstrates clinical symptoms，if he or she is confirmed to have AIDS by medical experts designated by local health administrative departments and if no treatment in quarantine can be provided within the place of detention, he or she may seek treatment outside the detention center on bail.
例2.
对于中国来说，问题更为复杂。
The problem is more complex for China.
例3.
此外，对于艾滋病病人和艾滋病病毒感染者家属的强制检查问题，也应予以关注。
In addition, we should highlight the issue of mandatory testing of family members of AIDS /HIV victims.
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