3. 选择模式拟定提纲
拟定提纲就是把构思好的题材按作文主旨的要求,根据一定的模式组织成层次清楚、合乎逻辑、前后连贯的作文框架。
经过对题目的酝酿构思,把筛选的内容按前后、重要次序排列,整理归纳成写文章的框架。仍以“Benefits of Sports and Games”为例,根据筛选整理的内容,主要采用列举法拟定以下提纲。
A. Benefits to body health
a. Make us strong
b. Especially help mental workers exercise their bodies
B. Benefits to life variety
a. Make one versatile(多才多艺的)
b. Enrich one's life with sports and games
C.Benefits to character-training
a. Enhance courage and enthusiasm
b.Train collectivist spirit
4. 内容写作
经过构思、拟定提纲这两个步骤,作者即可落笔成章。写作时,再加一个开头和结尾,即可形成一篇完整的说明文。
5. 检查修改
检查修改是作文写作的最后一步。检查时可从章、段、句、词4个层次入手:1)检查篇章的主题是否清楚?段落的安排是否合理?段与段之间的过渡是否自然、符合逻辑?文章的层次是否清楚明了?是否有与主题无关的内容?2)检查段落是否有明确的主题?主题句是否有概括性?推展句是否起到说明和解释主题句的作用?句与句之间的过渡是否连贯?段落层次是否分明?逻辑是否清楚?3)句型是否多样化(简单句、复合句、复杂句是否交叉使用)?句子结构的运用是否正确?有没有不恰当的句子删除?语法结构是否合乎规
则?是否有时态不一致、主谓不一致、垂悬句、破句、串句、指代不明、修饰错位等错误?4)遣词方面要检查词汇的运用是否妥当,动词的搭配、副词的位置、形容词的用法、名词的数和代词的格和性是否正确?有没有词性混淆或词语误用?拼写是否正确?最后还要检查标点符号和大小写是否正确。通过反复的检查修改,才能写出好的文章来。
6. 作文写作步骤范例
题目:The Learning of the Chinese Language
步骤一:缩小写作范围,明确主题和写作方法
范围:People all over the world are beginning to learn Chinese
主题思想:Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world.
文体:说明文
角度:第一人称
步骤二:构思
rich history, rich culture, more and more people, interested in learning Chinese ,because, they do research on the culture, do business with the Chinese, economic exchange, but Chinese is difficult,
The Chinese language is learnt in more than 50 countries, implement, reforms open-policy, in the future, become more
important,widely spread,learnt in about 1,000 schools,etc.
步骤三:筛选整理
(1) be interested in learning Chinese
(2) rich culture and history
(3) do research on the culture
(4) reforms and open-policy
(5) economic exchange
(6) Chinese is taught in more than 1,000 schools
(7) Chinese is taught in about 50 countries
(8) become more important in the future
(9) widely spread
步骤四:选择模式、拟定提纲
A. Many people from all over the world beginning to take an interest in the Chinese language
B. Reasons for taking an interest in the Chinese Language
a. to do research on the culture
b. to have economic and cultural exchanges
C. Prospects of the Chinese language
a. to become more important
b. to be spread world widely
步骤五:内容写作及修改
The Learning of the Chinese Language
Nowadays, more and more people all over the world are beginning to take an interest in Chinese. To my knowing,
Chinese language is learned in more than 1, 000 schools in more than 50 countries.
The reason for learning Chinese is that, first, China's ancient culture has attracted many people in the world. To understand and do research on this culture you must learn the Chinese language. Second, implement of China's economic reform and opening to the outside world has increased economic and culture changes.It is natural for people to learn Chinese in order to learn more about nowaday's China more quickly.
I'm sure that Chinese will become more important language in the world in the next century. As China will open future to the outside world the language is sure to spread the world widely.
修改文
The Learning of the Chinese Language
Nowadays more and more friends all over the world are beginning to take an interest in the Chinese language. To my
knowledge, Chinese language courses are given in more than 1,000 schools in over 50 countries.
There are various reasons for the widespread interest in Chinese.First of all, China's ancient culture has attracted many
people in the world. To understand and do research on this culture one must learn the Chinese language. Second,
implementation of China's economic reform and opening to the outside world has increased Sino-foreign economic and cultural exchanges. Therefore it's natural for people to learn Chinese in order to learn more about contemporary China more quickly.
I am sure that Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world in the 2lst century. As China will open further to the outside world the language is sure to be spread world widely.
本文的模式属于分析类。发展段对引言段中主题句所含的主旨进行逐一分析,阐明了其原因。也可以说是因果模式,先说果,后说因。在分析原因的过程中,又采用了列举的方法。最后一段通过分析得出结论。
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