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标题作文要求习作者就所给的标题进行写作。同段首句作文、关键词作文、情景作文和看图作文相比,标题作文具有较大的自主性。习作者在正确理解题意的基础上,可取不同角度,挑选所需素材,阐述自己的见解,从而发挥习作者的独创性。例如标题“One of My Friends”,这个题目可以写成一篇故事,也可以对一个人物进行描述。这个人物可以是你小学、中学或大学的一位好同学,或者一位老师等。不管你从哪个角度,哪个方面来写,运用恰当的文体,写出的文章切题、流畅,就可得到读者的认可。
1. 写作技巧
1)认真审题。拿到题目后,仔细思考,分析题意,搞清楚题目涉及的范围,确定文章的中心思想,切忌跑题。
2)选择正确的文体。有时一个题目能用几种文体来写,这时应看所给的题目是用说明文写好,还是用记叙文或其他文体来写更清楚。
3) 围绕文章的中心思想,打开思路,启动联想,列出你所能够想到的与主题有关的所有资料。
4)将所列材料进行筛选、分析和归类并落实到段;依次写出引言段、主题句和结尾句。
5)内容写作时,应紧扣主题,抓住重心,围绕主题句去扩展句子,写出内容充实、文理通顺的文章。
范例分析
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about "Friendship". Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write clearly.
Friendship
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范文:
Friendship
Friendship is important to us. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives, we cannot live without friendship just as we cannot survive without air and water. Friendship gives us a feeling of security and warmth; friendship encourages us to go ahead all the time.
But real friendship is not easy to come by. True friendship must be sincere and unconditional. It is based on mutual understanding, not on mutual benefit. Some people try to get back something from their friends, and their friends also try to make use of them. If such a relationship can be called friendship, we need no friends at all.
The mutual understanding between two friends means both of them have similar ideas and trust each other.
Otherwise, it is impossible for them to help each other and to make their friendship last long. As an old saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed". So real friendship should be able to stand all sorts of tests.
However, it is advisable to have as many good friends as we can. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. By his advice, we are persuaded to go the right way; by his help, we can be free from many difficulties; by his warning, we are aware of the danger of doing wrong action. Therefore, the more friends we have, the more help we can expect from them; and the more pleasure we can share with them. And we will see our lives as being beautiful, because we can find friends everywhere, all our lives.
评析:
本文一开始就指出“友谊”对我们每个人来说都是十分重要的,其重要性无异于空气和水。
但是真正的友谊却是不容易获得的,它是基于相互理解,而非相互利用。如果相互利用也算友谊的话,那还不如没有友谊。
接着作者讲了自己对“相互理解”的理解,既双方具有相似的看法并相互信任,否则就不可能使双方互相帮助使友谊长存。正如古老的谚语所云“患难朋友才是真正的朋友”。
好朋友对一个人有什么作用呢?好朋友可以是你的好老师,他的劝告、帮助、警告对你仍有很大的裨益,因此一个人应该广交朋友。
这是一篇十分简明、流畅的论说文。作者的思想十分明确,行文十分通顺、自然。环环相扣,一气呵成,连贯性很强。由一个论点到另一个论点的过渡亦极自然,没有凌乱、凑合的感觉,这正是我们所要学习和掌握的。
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