情景作文是一种根据规定的情景，诸如时间、地点、人物、活动场面等为中心，而构思文章的方式。这种作文为习作者提供了写作材料，有利于培养他们选材、组材和确定中心的能力。

1. 写作技巧

1) 认真分析、研究所给的情景，确定出文章的中心。

2) 围绕文章中心选择材料。我们不能把情景中有可能出现的每一个动作、每一个神态、每一样景物都按着次序写下来，而应对这些材料进行分析，挑出其中符合题目，能表达中心思想的部分去写。

3) 围绕中心，大胆想象。在特定的环境里，特定的人物会想些什么、说些什么、做些什么。最好能把自己置身于此情此景之中，去想象、去体会、去感受，依据自己的思维去创作。只有恰如其分地大胆想象，才能写出流畅自然的文章。

4) 注意文体和写作格式。

2. 范例分析

例

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the given information. Your composition should be no less than 100 words. Remember to write clearly.

Suppose the people of the Earth are using up oil resources soon. What will happen to our life? What alternative energy resouces can be found? Use your imagination and write an essay on the topic: A World Without Oil

范文：

A World Without Oil

What if our world should run out of oil? It's probable that on your roof and on the road surface an oil product is applied.

The engine of your air conditioner may also have an oil-fed generator.

In your kitchen and bathroom, many things originate from oil or petroleum, such as plastic fittings, nylon curtains and

cosmetics.

In the fields fertilizers and insecticides made from petroleum are used. You use fuel to run your car. You wear clothes that are based on petroleum products.

Now the world's known oil resources are being used up rapidly. What alternative energy resources can be found before

the known deposit runs out? Some scientists suggest making use of the energy generated by human movement and motor traffic. Others suggest using alternative energy resources such as solar power.

评析：

这是一篇给出了规定的情景——在世界资源（石油)枯竭的情况下，我们将如何生活的情景作文。

作者首先根据提示文字，展开自己的思路。在第一段中，用疑问词“what if”引出“倘若我们用尽了石油资源，世界将会怎么样？”这个问题，作为文章的开头句。既能切情切景，恰如其分，又能吸引读者，为后面展开想象开了一个好头。

接着在二、三段中，作者将自己置于此情此景中，用举例说明的方法，以承转词“such as”引出几个实例，来说明石油资源和产品在人们日常生活和工农业生产中的重要性，强调石油资源不可缺少。

最后一段，作者根据文章的提示，围绕主题，以表示时间的承转词“now”开头，为我们设想出了在石油资源枯竭后，将会有两种新型的替代性能源产生，引起读者产生进一步联想。

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