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写作中段落的顺序

发布时间: 2017-05-24 15:02:14   作者:etogether.net   来源: 网络   浏览次数:

 

Nowadays more and more people like to watch TV. So TV plays a very important part in our life. But watching TV has both advantages and disadvantages. Generally speaking, the advantages can be listed as follows :
Firstly,you can expand your knowledge by watching TV. As we all know,learning things by TV is much faster than by listening to the radio or just by reading books. For it has colorful pictures as well as wonderful music. Secondly, you may know anybody you want to know such as famous singers, superstars, scientists and so on. What’s more, you can go everywhere by traveling programs. Let’s suppose, if you like traveling very much,but you have to work on weekends or holidays,you must be very sad. And now open your TV and it’ll take you to anywhere.
Every coin has two sides. The disadvantages are also obvious. For example, watching too much TV can easily become short-sighted, especially for children and students. To make matters worse, some young students are so obsessed with watching TV that they even give up their studies gradually. 
 
Through the above analysis, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
本段用演绎顺序首先指出看电视既有优点也有缺点,之后分别展开论述其优点有哪些,缺点有哪些。“归纳顺序”是指把具体细节或事例先行托出,然后逐步引向结论,或是个人的观点,或是讨论的总结,可称为“先分述,后概括”模式,它和演绎顺序相反,即把段落的主题放在段尾。如:
A combination of cries from exotic animals and laughter and gasps from children fills the air along with the smells of popcorn and peanuts. A hungry lion bellows for dinners, his roar breaking through the confusing chatter of other animals. Birds of all kinds chirp endlessly at curious children. Monkeys swing from limb to limb performing gymnastics for onlookers. A comedy routine by orangutans employing old shoes garments incites squeals of amusement. The sights and sounds and smells of the zoo inform and entertain children of all ages.
上面段落用归纳顺序首先介绍了动物园里各种动物发出的声音、孩子的笑声以及空气中弥漫着的爆米花和炒栗子的味道,最后一句话总结所有这些都深深地吸引着各个年龄阶段的孩子们。
(四)因果顺序(Cause-effect Order) 
“因果顺序”是指根据某事物的原因推导出其结果,或根据某种结果分析其原因的写作顺序。“因果顺序”有两种组织形式:一种是“先因后果”,另一种是“先果后因”。
1.先因后果
“先因后果”指在段落写作时先指出原因,后分析结果的写作方法。如:
Every year, earthquakes are responsible for a large number of deaths and vast amount of destruction in various parts of the world. Some of the destruction are indirectly caused by the quake itself, and an example of this is the collapse of buildings as a result of the vibration. Other damage results from land slides,large ocean waves or major fires which are initiated by the quake.
上面段落首先指出“很多伤亡和破坏都是由地震造成的”这一结果,其后紧接着分析地震所造成的 这些伤亡和破坏的具体体现。
2.先果后因
“先果后因”指在段落写作时先指出结果后再分析原因的写作方法。如:
There are many reasons why languages change. To start with, various languages that start from the same parent developed their own uniqueness after speakers drifted away from one another to establish isolated, independent communities. Language change is also due to the influence of and interactions with foreign cultures, often as a result of military conquest. Another cause for language change is rapidly expanding technology and new systems of communication. They bring all cultures and languages into closer contact and borrowing between languages has become a common phenomenon in the contemporary world. All languages change as the experiences of their speakers change.
此段首先提出结果“许多原因导致语言的变化”,然后分别论述“造成语言变化”的原因。
以上给大家介绍了段落组织的一些具体顺序,在具体的写作实践中,有时可以只用其中一种顺序组织段落,但通常情况下都是综合地使用不同的顺序,这样会使自己的观点给人留下更深刻的印象,更令人信服。文章段落内容会更加统一,结构更紧凑,条理更清晰,首尾更好地呼应。
 
 
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