I saw a flaming doorway in front,put the bundle over my face and ran. My feet burned me terribly,but I got through. As I reached the cold air outside, my bundle of clothes gave a thin cry. I nearly dropped it in my surprise. Then I saw a crowd gathered in the street. A woman in a night-dress and a borrowed man's coat screamed as she saw me and came running madly.
“My baby! My baby!"she cried.The crowd cheered wildly as she took the smoke-blackened bundle out of my arms. I had some difficulty in recognizing her. She was the Moyor's wife and I have saved her baby,I was a hero!
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关键词语:
in the middle of the night, on the top floor of an old wooden house,waked up by fire and smoke, ran away from the stairs, ran into a room, fell over something soft, picked up a bundle, crashed to the floor below, ran through a flaming doorway, the bundle gave a cry, a woman screamed and ran towards the author, she was the Mayor's wife, the author became a hero
提纲:
时间:in the middle of the night
地点:on the top floor of an old wooden house
人物:the author
事件:the author,waked up by fire,rushed away from the stairs, picked up the bundle of clothes, protected himself, ran through a flamimg doorway, the bundle gave a cry,a baby
结果:the author became a hero
范文:
One night the author stayed on the top floor of an old strange wooden house and was waked up by fire and smoke and screams. In a hurry he rushed away from the stairs, got into a room and fell over something soft. He picked up the bundle of clothes to protect himself and crashed to the floor below. When he ran through a flaming doorway the bundle gave a faint cry. A woman screamed and ran to get the bundle which turned out to be her baby. The woman was the Mayor's wife and the author became a hero at once.
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