1) The Internet has been considered largely as a source of data and information. But Now it is common for young people to roam the Information Superhighway in search of companionship and love. While it is believed that love can be found on the Internet, I will be very cautious about it.(最后一句直接表明态度:对网恋要谨慎）

2) Relationships can be complicated in cyberspace. In real life for reasons ranging from geographical to social and income differences, it is not very easy for people with mutual interests to get together. Yet the Net offers a place for them to communicate. As the communication takes place in cyberspace, the most secrets or concealed wishes will be uttered. And this may easily leads to friendship and even romance.(首先肯定网恋的可能性)

3) Yet most Net users are mote likely to project aspects of the person they wish they could be so that they can impress others to befriend them. The voice speaking through the other side of the line often disguises a user's true personality. So long as the relationship is confined to the Net, there is no problems. For if you don't get along with someone on the Net, you can simply ignore his/her messages. But it often develops a physical encounter, which might bring an unpleasant and damaging outcome. (然后分析其可能出现的后果)

4) My friend started a Net relationship with a man she knew as "King".They kept in frequent contact for half a year and, as increasingly fond of each other, decided to have their first F2F encounter, which was deligt.  But as she got more opportunities to be with him, she found he was not the person on the Net. She made painful effort and suffered a lot before she was able to stop the relationship.(用具体事例来说明)

5) There is no denying that some manage to build up solid relationship through the Internet. But studies show that many are disappointed and hurt by it.(首尾呼应)

闪光点:

1. 句式丰富:be considered largely as a source of data, for reasons ranging from geographical to social and income differences, project aspects of the person they wish they could be, There is no denying that some manage to build up solid relationship

2. 词汇变化:love--romance-relationship, friendship--companionship, on the Internet-in cyberspace--on the Net, conceal--disguise, physical encounter--F2F encounter

3. 低频词汇:roam, cautious, range from, befriend, conceal, confine, disguise

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