Style:
formal informal
written oral
Diction: formal vs. ordinary
stock decline remind bear in mind
number go down make sure to know not forget
Sentence structure: impersonal vs. personal or passive vs. active
It has been noted that the Studems are requested to remind Penalties for overdue books
stock of books … themselves,.. will be enforced...
The number of books... Please make sure you know... We are going to enforce the rules …
Person:
third impersonal tone first person to second person tone
译文比较:
a. 查本馆藏书锐减。学生当不忘本馆书籍流通之规则和他人之需。逾期不归还者当受严罚。
b. 图书馆的书接最近大量减少,请大家牢记借书的规定,不要忘记图书馆是为大众提供方便的场所。因此,从现在起我们将更严格地执行規定。特此警告!
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