13. They remarked now he took a different seat from that which he usually occupiec when he chose to attend divine worship.
他往常做礼拜的时候，总坐在固定的座位上，可是那天他们发现他不坐老位置了。（此句使用了逆序分译法，较好地传达了原文的意思。）
14. He visited many places, in all of which he was received with the usual enthusiasm which attended hts arduous labors,
他访问了许多地方，到处受到热情的欢迎。他的艰苦努力是经常受到热情欢迎的。（此句原文中有两个定语从句，将这样ー个英文长句分译成两个独立的句子，意思显得很清楚。）
15. Intellectually emancipated at a time when women of good family were not encouraged to do anything more ambitious than dabble in the arts, she became the editor of a review entitled Correspondence des Familles in which she was bold enough to publish essays by the revolutionary socialist Jules Valles,
当时，有教养的人家对于女子至多不过让她们对艺术稍有涉猎，并不鼓励她们去做比此更有抱负的事情。但她不受旧思想的约束，担任了一家名叫《家庭通讯》杂志的编辑。她在这个刊物上大胆地发表了革命社会主义者朱尔•瓦莱斯的文章。（一个英语长句译成三句汉语。）
16. Distant thunder greeted this scheme, from the south Pacific, where de Gaulle on his travels sent orders to prepare proposals.
当时远在南太平洋地区旅行的戴高乐听到这个计划，大发雷霆，下令提出新的方案。（打散原文的结构，重新组合译文把译文分成几小部分，读来流畅顺口。）
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