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2024-07-31 09:08:33    etogether.net    网络    


因为建议和报告种类繁多,涉及很多方面,所以很难具体介绍每一种文本的翻译方法。但是,有必要掌握相关翻译的主要方法技巧和一些翻译的译例。请记住以下四点。


1. 要搞清楚所翻译文本的写作目的,是建议还是请求,或者是针对某一问题提出的解决方案。

2. 要详细了解文本中所涉及的内容、专业术语、特殊意义、措施和方法等。

3. 要搞清楚作者和读者之间的关系,这有助于保证忠实地再现原文。

4. 要搞清楚原文的语气和态度:正式、半正式还是非正式,然后真实地在中文文本中再现。


下面是学生向导师提交的研究报告的一部分以及相应的中文文本。

Dear Professor Joe,

For my formal research report assignment, I propose to research the problem of computer security and produce a formal report that would be of value to office managers who have an interest in maintaining the confidentiality of electronically stored records.

Since I am completing the requirement for a major in computer science and am contemplating graduate work in Business Administration, I have a strong academic interest in knowing just how secure computerized information is and how secure it can be. I also have an occupational interest in the subject because computer security has become a much-discussed subject in the office where I hold a part-time job as a Data Processor....

Rather than spend a great deal of time trying to show the seriousness of the problem of insufficient security, I only want to assure a reader who already is of the opinion that lack of adequate security can be financially dangerous. Thus I would like to devote only the introduction of the report to showing how serious the problem is. The main body of the report would be divided into just two sections: one for the controls that are already widely practiced and one for those that are too new, too expensive, or too complicated to have become widely adopted. In the first section, I will investigate the reason why the established methods aren't as successful as they should be. In the second, I will evaluate the relative merits of the more exotic controls.

This is my present plan of organization......

...

中文文本:

亲爱的乔教授:

关于我的正式研究报告,我想研究计算机的安全性问题,并提交一份对行政管理人员有价值的正式报告。这些人员对维护电子存储记录的机密问题颇感兴趣。

我目前正在攻读计算机科学专业的必修课,并考虑做商务管理研究生,因此对计算机目前处理信息的安全性以及可能会达到什么样的安全程度产生了浓厚的专业兴趣。我也对这一课题产生了职业兴趣,因为在我打工的这家公司里(我担任公司的数据处理员),计算机的安全性已成为大家讨论最多的一个热门话题......

我不打算花大量的时间来说明计算机欠安全这一问题的严重性。我只想让已有这种看法的读者确信:缺乏足够的安全防范,可能会导致经济危险。因此,我打算仅用报告的引言部分来说明该问题的严重性。报告的正文只分为两部分:一部分讨论已经广泛用于实践的操作控制,另一部分探讨不宜广泛采用的太新、太昂贵或者太复杂的一些操作控制。在报告的第一部分,我将调查公认的方法不像我们所期待的那样成功的原因。在报告的第二部分,我将评估一些更新奇的操作控制的相对优点。

以下是我目前的结构计划:

......


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