1) Which is more important in life, knowledge from the books you read, or personal experience you gain in reality? The answer may vary from person to person. The young, educated may emphasize the former, and the old may stress the latter. But in my opinion, they are of the same importance. (引出要比较的知识和经验,并表明两者都重要)
2) Experience is priceless. How to become an efficient secretary? How to prepare for your first child to come into the world? There is so much experience we need in careers, in life and even in academic studies. It helps one deal with the problems with ease and confidence. Especially for students who grow up in the ivory tower, to get involved in practical activities and to accumulate experience of different kinds is more crucial. (首先强调经验的重要)
3) Experience, however, is limited in terms of time and space.(主题句)For one thing, it is impossible for anyone to experience all the important events and meet all the famous people. For another, as the speed with which skills are obsolete and new problems crop up is unprecedented because of the fast development of society, experience is far less adequate. Depending too much on it only leads to narrow-mindedness and prejudice. (分析单靠经验的缺点)
4) One way to compensate for it is to read books. (主题句)Books of various kinds can bring us almost unlimited additional experience. From books you can not only trace back to the wisdom of our antecedents, but keep up with the latest developments of science and technology. To be sure, it's secondhand experience. But it is the ideal supplement to our own limited experience. Few of us can travel around the world, or live long beyond one hundred years, but all of us can live many lives by reading books.(接着指出书本知识的重要性)
5) Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful, book knowledge makes one more learned.(归纳总结,作出平衡性结论)
闪光点:
1.首尾呼应:But in my opinion, they are of the same importance. --Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential.
2.开头独特:以反映主题思想的问题开头:Which is more important in life, knowledge from the books you read, or personal experience you gain in reality? (开门见山,直截了当,又发人深省)
3.用词变化:emphasize--stress，important--essential--crucial，get involved in practical activities--experience all the important events
4. 词汇亮点:get involved in,accumulate experience of different kinds, in terms of time, crор up, compensate for, trace back to, keep up with
5. 句子修辞:Few of us can travel around the world, or live long beyond one hundred years, but all of us can live many lives by
reading books. (对偶) While experience makes one more resourceful , book knowledge makes one more learned. (平行)
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