1.今年上海市将开始新一轮三年环保行动计划。新三年环保行动计划内容与第一轮三年行动计划有何不同？新一轮的环保行动要达到什么目标？

模板句型精析：This year,Shanghai will launch a new round of three-year environmental protection campaign. How does this campaign differ from that of the first round and what does the new round intend to achieve?

常见不当译文：This year,Shanghai will launch a new round of three-year environmental protection campaign. How does the new round of three-year environmental protection campaign differ from that of the first round of three-year environmental protection campaign and what does the new round of environmental protection campaign tend to achieve?

模板句型精析：作为访谈类文章的开场白，这个模块句子的特点在于翻译时对“减词法”的运用。常见不当译文的问题在于太啰嗦，极大地影响了翻译的效率以及听众的情绪。英语与中文的表达形式不同，往往求新求简。因此考生可按照模板句型进行同类项的合并，不难发现“环保行动计划”是句中出现频率最高的部分。因此，可利用减词法对其进行简化。除此以外，在同一个句子或段落中适当运用代词，如it,they等，也是口译中非常务实、有效的简译方式。

2. 最近一个时期，上海连续出现蓝天白云、空气清新的好天气。

模板句型1:The recent days have witnessed/seen the incessant fine weather with blue sky,white clouds and fresh air in Shanghai.

模板句型2:Recently,Shanghai has been enjoying a fine weather with blue sky,white clouds and fresh air.

常见不当译法：Recently,the fine weather with blue sky,white clouds and fresh air has appeared incessantly in Shanghai.

模板句型精析：常见不当译文有明显的翻译腔。这个模块句子是“多主句”，可如模板句型1，选择时间段为主语，运用模板句型“时间点/段+see/witness+adj.+n.”进行翻译；也可如模板句型2，选择地点“上海”作为主语，这时，后面的谓语动词应选用enjoy，这个词也是非常高频的模块词，比如说某企业“享誉全球”，可以用enjoy global reputation来表达。能用好“多主句”，考生在考场上就不会“六神无主”了。

3.上海的空气质量的提高，可以说是上海环境治理取得了初步成效。上海的第一轮环保三年行动计划涉及水环境治理、大气环境治理、固体废物处置、绿化建设、重点工业区环境综合整治等五大领域110个项目。

模板句型1:The improvement of Shanghai's air quality shows/indicates/manifests the initial success in Shanghai's environmental treatment. The first round of Shanghai's three-year environmental protection campaign involved/contained 110 projects in the 5 major areas/fields/domains/realms, including water environment treatment, air environment treatment, disposal of solid waste, greening construction, and comprehensive environmental treatment of key industrial areas.

模板句型2:The improvement of Shanghai's air quality is an indication/a manifestation of the initial success in Shanghai's environmental treatment. The first round of Shanghai's three-year environmental protection campaign involved/contained water environment treatment, air environment treatment, disposal of solid waste, greening construction, and comprehensive environmental treatment of key industrial areas. The above five major areas covered 110 projects.

模板句型精析：模块长句中第一句的难点在于“可以说是”，这里并不是“say”的意思。访谈类文字中出现相对口语化的词语的频率更高，在理解的基础上进行翻译是非常重要的。模板句型1使用show，indicate 或manifest 便是明智的选择，因为前面的现象正是环境治理的成果。这种高频模块词在研究报告中出现的频率也很高，比如“本图/表/研究报告表明……”等。而模板句型2则做了“动静转化”，通过be+a(n)+n.的结构来完成和原有动词的转换。句子的后半部分是一个长句，是典型的并列结构。因此，考生可如模板句型1,通过involve/contain.., including...的结构性语言完成翻译，当然，“包括”未必译作include,这里充分体现了语言选择的多样性。在口译时，必须做到顺句驱动，因此考生按照模板句型2翻译时，结尾部分宜采用“分句法”另起一句。除此以外，对于“在……领域”这些引导并列结构的词组，考生也应熟记于心。